Amazing poem Lawrence. Really tells the horrific story of a soldier before and after a war. One wish, check the second line in verse 3, it needs to be 1 syllable shorter. Maybe take off ‘He’ Adderchog. 2 MArbles.
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Amazing poem Lawrence. Really tells the horrific story of a soldier before and after a war. One wish, check the second line in verse 3, it needs to be 1 syllable shorter. Maybe take off ‘He’ Adderchog. 2 MArbles.