Very thought provoking Izzy. Check the 3rd line on verse 1. It needs to be 5 syllables. Maybe add ‘All’ e.g. ‘Who all lost their lives’ Well done. 1 Marble.
welldone i loved your poems
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Very thought provoking Izzy. Check the 3rd line on verse 1. It needs to be 5 syllables. Maybe add ‘All’ e.g. ‘Who all lost their lives’ Well done. 1 Marble.
welldone i loved your poems